Secret Name   %            
Summary 4 Events &
Threads
  Grade So Far  % Problem Definition Approach & Originality Assumptions & Limitations Result, Impact, Important Talk Criticism RAW % Score Date Submitted # Days late   Final Grade please grade the summaries. See already graded S1 to see example comments (shee with grades for S1 t is already posted, Due date is
Max   8 5 5 5 5 5     09/09     0.94
    >24                     0.70
Total   88.2 5 5 5 5 5   25       8
Acrobat 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Well done.
Andy 21 84 5 5 5 5 1 21 84 09/09 0   84 Only stylistic remarks and compsure instead of specific concept for presenter critique (infact if seems very similar to your previous critiques.
Artistic Potato 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 OK.
Bamboo 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Nicely Done.
Bellhop One 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Well done.
Birdseye 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 OK.
Brimstone 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100  
Broadside 21 84 5 5 5 5 1 21 84 09/09 0   84 Speaker critique is not informative enough.
Buckeye 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Well done.
Buckshot 0 0           0 0 09/09 0   0 No submission
Cactus 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Nicely done. Great.
Carbine 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Excellent!
Carpet 23 92 5 5 5 5 3 23 92 09/09 0   92 Well written but no critique on the presenter
Cartwheel 21 84 5 3 4 4 5 21 84 09/09 0   84 Lacking some details speaker critique is good though.
Challenger 23 92 5 5 5 5 3 23 92 09/09 0   92 Well done but  speaker critique lacks substance
Chandelier 16 64 4 3 4 4 1 16 64 09/09 0   64 Needs more  substance. Presenter critique too generic only about stylistics
Checkerboard 13 52 3 2 3 4 1 13 52 09/09 0   52 You are not really contrasting why threads are better than events. Only stylistic suggestions rather than on substance
Checkmate 21 84 5 4 4 3 5 21 84 09/09 0   84 Could have inlcuded more details, the last mpart of you summary is not correct. 
Coach House 20 80 5 3 4 3 5 20 80 09/09 0   80 Lacks some insights, a bit thin.
Companion 0 0           0 0 09/09 0   0  
Curbside 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100  
Driftwood 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 OK.
Echo 13 52 4 2 3 3 1 13 52 09/09 0   52 Lacks substance. Not sure if your read the paper at all. Presenter critique too generic only about stylistics
Firelord 16 64 4 3 4 4 1 16 64 09/09 0   64 A bit too thin, No presenter critique
Hudson 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Excellent!
Lightfoot 20 80 5 3 4 3 5 20 80 09/09 0   80 Lacks some insights,   a bit thin.
Magic 20 80 5 4 4 4 3 20 80 09/09 0   80 Lacks some insights. And no speaker critique
Peninsula 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 cannot read file. (file is damaged) : EDIT: Regraded emailed version - and nice solid work.
Pincushion 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Good.
Playground 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 09/09 0   0 No submission
Pork Chop 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 09/09 0   0 No submission
Professor 23 92 5 5 5 5 3 23 92 09/09 0   92 Speaker critique is not informative enough (needs to specify what specific topic needs more details).
Punch Bowl 20 80 5 3 3 4 5 20 80 09/09 0   80 You need to cover the problem in  more depth.
Ridgeline 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Well done.
Ringside 21 84 5 4 4 4 4 21 84 09/09 0   84 Lacks some insights,   a bit thin.
Sandstone 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Well done!
Shotgun 18 72 4 3 3 3 5 18 72 09/09 0   72 Lacking substance and depth (especially since this topic is really interesting)
Skymaster 23 92 5 5 5 5 3 23 92 09/09 0   92 No speaker critique (but you summary is overall of good quality).
Storm King 15 60 3 3 3 3 3 15 60 09/09 0   60 Lacking substance and depth, speaker critique to generic
Sylvester 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 09/09 0   0  
Tower 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Nicely done.
Volcano 20 80 5 3 4 3 5 20 80 09/09 0   80 Lacks some insights, and  a bit thin.
Windstone 25 100 5 5 5 5 5 25 100 09/09 0   100 Well done.